White hand stroking my face, clammy
Dead even as you wrapped your arm around me
"Lets go for a ride" you choked
Through green moss, dirt and all that that entails
"She said lets not go too fast" I whisper,
But in myself I know as I wrap my arms
Sink them even, into that half rotted flesh
The warmth of inside scaring off the teeth of the wind
"Your first time?" asks the helmet
And like so often in dreams I see your skull through it
Bleached. Is that how you went?
"You know that!" and a playful slap knocks a maggot ridden arm to the ground
"Dont fight it then" - Dreamlike, as dreams so seldom are
I felt it move beneath us
That lor grumble that forbids denial
And we were off
Overtake the death bus, unseen horror in a tow truck,
And even dare to flip off the family of betrayal and lies
"This is where I have to leave"
Thud of a finger hitting the wheel
"But you'll come back right"
The helmet shook
"Darling, the damned stay dead forever"
















Comments
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"Finish each day and be done with it. You have done what you could; some blunders and absurdities have crept in; forget them as soon as you can. Tomorrow is a new day; you shall begin it too serenely ... to be encumbered with your old nonsense"
-RWE
The rider being dead yes, creates a hauntingly sad tone to the poem combined with the intimacy between the persona and the rider.
I like the theme of the dead sharing with the living something they are linked with.
It gave more dimensions to this poem and the "ride".
On one hand the ride can be interpreted as a trip down memory lane, or a representation of the walk the living and the dead once did together, while both still alive.
A very memorable piece.
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If there is possibly one thing more important than love,
more complex than love, and more simple than love...
It would be art.
my gallery
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"Sounds like the goddamn Spanish Inquisition!" - ST IV - Bones
"Wait'll yer sittin' pretty with a case o' Andorian Shingles and see if yer so relaxed with your EYEBALLS BLEEDING." - ST XI - Bones
I really like, as others have said, the imagery of the rider being already dead.
Little genius
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